my 2cents: 1. gambau rimau tu..ada kelas. the only touch up required is only photoshopin' material.. capturing wise..all elements are there.. 2. apa benda menatang ni..tapi aku rasa yr left side (darker brown) should be eliminated by zooming in somemore..it can be a little annoying to me..seolah2 mengacau and exist there without any purpose.. 3. kambing ni masalah angle. tak tau ngko nak ambik kayu ke, kambing coklat tu ke, kambing putih tu ke.. 4. yg rusa ni ok. but to me..i would wait some more for other angle.. the position of the rusa seems a little bit cliche..
but overall...aku rasa masalah basic macam vibration, metering etc..ngko dah ok... the rest are purely artistic in nature..which subject to individual's bias..
binatang yg kedua tu namanya memerang , tp tak ingat pula nama orang putih dia. hmm kalau that brown is disturbing, i can remove it via image cropping. ihihi.
The deer is a "so-what?" picture. 2 dimensional. No story line. Nothing to grip the attention, nothing to tell. Need to lower the angle a little bit, waist level or just take the deer close, without taking in the whole body. Probably need to use aperture f4, on a 300mm. That should blur everything else.
a "so-hard" comment. i take that as a challenge. but doesnt mean you have a good pix, but just better than me. ahaks :) thank you a lot. maybe need to get a good 300mm lense.. my 200mm just can go that far.. that deer was damn far from my spot.
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bro,
my 2cents:
1. gambau rimau tu..ada kelas. the only touch up required is only photoshopin' material.. capturing wise..all elements are there..
2. apa benda menatang ni..tapi aku rasa yr left side (darker brown) should be eliminated by zooming in somemore..it can be a little annoying to me..seolah2 mengacau and exist there without any purpose..
3. kambing ni masalah angle. tak tau ngko nak ambik kayu ke, kambing coklat tu ke, kambing putih tu ke..
4. yg rusa ni ok. but to me..i would wait some more for other angle.. the position of the rusa seems a little bit cliche..
but overall...aku rasa masalah basic macam vibration, metering etc..ngko dah ok... the rest are purely artistic in nature..which subject to individual's bias..
u r getting there!!!
wautz
tuan wautz, thank you for leaving your comments.
binatang yg kedua tu namanya memerang , tp tak ingat pula nama orang putih dia. hmm kalau that brown is disturbing, i can remove it via image cropping. ihihi.
keep posting your comments. hehehe.
The deer is a "so-what?" picture. 2 dimensional. No story line. Nothing to grip the attention, nothing to tell. Need to lower the angle a little bit, waist level or just take the deer close, without taking in the whole body. Probably need to use aperture f4, on a 300mm. That should blur everything else.
mr santini
a "so-hard" comment. i take that as a challenge. but doesnt mean you have a good pix, but just better than me. ahaks :) thank you a lot. maybe need to get a good 300mm lense.. my 200mm just can go that far.. that deer was damn far from my spot.
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